Choose Your Own Spanking
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(****, ?/?, Edgy, Could contain anything.)

This is an interactive story where you get to choose how the story progresses. (Approximately 1,040 words. Originally published 1998-02.)

You are a little embarrassed to be seen buying tickets to a G-rated movie, but you get through it and find a seat inside. The movie turns out to be much more entertaining than you would have thought. It was a cartoon, a story about a little elf girl's adventures. In the beginning she was a naughty elf, though, and her disobedience led her into all sorts of trouble.

The movie opened with with a bang. Literally, the loud slapping of palm against flesh, the light cries of a terrified young girl, and the chanting of "ten, eleven, twelve, thirteen, fourteen, fifteen, sixteen, _seventeen_, *eighteen*, **nineteen*, *TWENTY*!!" The picture gradually faded from black into a lovely scene in the middle of a delicate green forest, where in front of small wooden cabin a little elf-girl lay stretched across the broad lap of her dear father, her petite skirt lifted to expose of the pure white of her panties, as his massive palm crashed again and again against her wiggling bottom.

The animation was very well-done, the writhing of the girl realistic, her open-mouthed cries of "Oh!" and "Ouch!" and "Please, Daddy, that's enough" absolutely delightful. Surrounding the two were obviously the relatives, aunts, uncles, cousins, brothers, sisters, perhaps even neighbors, and of course all the wonderful little forest animals running to catch the sight, eyes wide and ears perked at the sounds from the glen, all laughing and joking and counting the spanks with much hilarity.

At twenty smacks the spanking stopped and the little girl rose, big blue tears trickling down her face and splashing on the ground, frightening a comical little grasshopper which did not appreciate the unexpected shower.

"I hope your learned your lesson you naughty little elf!" scolded the father, his hand glowing a dull pink. The girl stood, the hem of her skirt sticking out behind her as it rested on her swollen, throbbing bottom, and she reached back and rubbed herself, wincing at the touch. "Yes, father," she sniffed, bowing her head and wiping her nose.

"Well don't let this happen again or you'll get double that!" All the neighbors and relatives express shot and mock horror at this, and even the forest animals shake their heads at this awful threat. There's a quick shot of a mamma squirrel scolding two sorry-looking baby squirrels in the manner of the elf-father, saying, "You see! That's what happens to naughty children!" Then she flips them across her lap and begins to spank them soundly!

Of course the elf-girl didn't learn her lesson very well. Within minutes she's caused all sorts of crazy trouble and about ten minutes into the movie she's back over her daddy's lap for another bottom warming, this time with a hairbrush. This scene wasn't quite as explicit as the first, mostly filled with shots of alarmed forest animals and relatives shaking their heads and murmuring, "Won't that elf _ever_ learn!" but the scene was longer, with the complete audio of the entire spanking from start to finish. There was one close-up shot from right above the girl's white panties as the hairbush smacks her round little bottom mercilessly, and the scene was shown from several delightful angles, including one from the perspective of a little mouse, looking up at what seems to be a monstrous bottom being soundly spanked, but mostly you see close-ups of the girl's mouth openening with a cry at each swat, her eyes dripping tears, and shots of the angry father's face.

Afterwards the watery-eyed girl is clearly abashed and sorry, and she promises her father faithfully that she will never, never, _never_ need a spanking again, at which the old man rolls his eyes as though this is an obvious fantasy, and mutters, "We shall see."

The story turned out to be a cute little tale (in more ways than one, hem) about how the girl's disobedience and rash thinking get her into all kinds of trouble but eventually she ends up saving the entire elf village from the evil Snart, the orge who wanted to eat all the elves, and everything is forgiven.

To your secret disappointment there are no more spankings, but the film has several obvious references, such as the first time the giant Snart and the elf-girl meet and he threatens her with the wonderful phrase, "And what happens to naughty little girls who disobey their fathers and talk to strangers?" as he holds up what is undoubtedly the largest hairbrush the girl has ever seen. She goes pale and her little hands go back to protect her delicate bottom and she shakes her head but cannot speak she is so frightened! Near the end of the movie there are a couple comments from relatives and neighbors on the elf-girl's improved behavior, including one grandfather elf who says to the girl's father, "I guess we won't be seeing her over your knee again anytime soon!" But the father smiles and says with a broad wink, "Don't be too sure!" and everyone laughs delightfully while the little heroine blushes furiously, one hand unconsciously sliding to cover her petite bottom.

"That was some movie!" you say to Erica as you leave the theatre. "What a naughty little elf!"

"She certainly was," says Erica with a naughty gleam in her own eyes. "Didn't you think she deserved another spanking at the end?"

"Well, it certainly would have completed the circle," you say with a wink. "Opening _and_ ending with a spanking would be been perfect!"

"It's been an awfully long time since I last got a spanking. I wonder what it feels like," muses Erica mildly. "Did you see how frightened her face was when that Snart held up that hairbrush? Oh, it was delightful! I felt chills all the way down to my tummy."

Suddenly you realize this is an opportunity that may never come again. You don't want to risk your friendship with Erica, but wouldn't this be the ideal time to approach her and see if, just maybe, she'd _really_ like a spanking?

Do you:

1. Ask Erica to let you spank her [Go to 42]

2. Laugh it off and go home [Go to 43]